the choice of instrumentation for "This Small Town Called Blowfly" is very well thought out, nicely done!! i love that you made an alteration of it to convey a drastic change in your conceptual videogame's plot; i am a SUCKER for videogames that either employ dynamically changing music or theme variations. :~)
i'm quite elated that you chose to represent a larger timeframe of the videogame so that we could get a feel of how the plot progresses; i've love to hear what the other tracks would be and what scenarios they'd be for, if you ever develop this further!