The melody on the first track was a bit redundant for me. I got jumpscared by the sudden explosion of volume on the switch to "Screw Him!", I think it's my fav track here though, I like the orchestral nature of it. I also like the use of field recordings on this and things like phone beeps and discord notif sounds. You did accomplish to convey a story by itself, that's great. Every track has it's own personality.