Oh... That was beautiful! That airy, uplifting melody made me want to stand up and sing... Heh. Good job!

P.S. Rawr!

Really cool thematic execution here. Contrasting the piano in the intro with some soft synths, subtle in the mix and just peeking through, is really clever. Adds some really nice texture. Those pads gently coming in and accompanying the main instrumentation is also really nice. The guitar work in this is fantastic - beautifully soft and contemplative. Almost whisper-like in the beginning before finding its voice and standing out.

The middle section has some nice use of noise as a texture to really create an expansive bed to work off of here. Keeping the guitar more on the clean side is a good shout, makes it so you can weave so many more subtleties into the playing and complement the lines with harmony and emphasis on certain notes. Reverting back to the piano and soft synths after this section was a great way to call back to the first section of the track and provide a kind of mental reset. 

All in all, this is great. The structure of the song is fantastic - the first had me right in place of what you're describing, looking out of a window and seeing the world beyond the pane. The second is akin to the decision to get up and open the door. Venture out into the world and embrace that freedom, while the last section represents those steps outside growing more and more distant as you wander off into the world. Good job, this was a delight to listen to.

oh, i love the story you wrote regarding how you envisioned the jam's themed illustration and how you wanted to connect to that with your composition! the track you wrote feels very gentle and subdued, but i think that works in a sort of daydream-esque manner that matches how the character is only imagining their freedom! :0

i like that the piece does pick up around 1:50 to match the storyline! i am curious how this might fit in a videogame — i can see it working for a credits scene since it's not too overwhelming in nature.

I guess I won't reiterate most of what was said, one that I haven't checked if anyone said is that I feel the part where they are trapped, indoors and in the shadow would warrant a big downturn in the song, I felt that was missing based on the description of how you interpreted the theme, but otherwise it was a nice listen, some more work on the mix, maybe consider adding the darkness part at the end and I would call it a day xD Good job!

Good job on the sound choices, each piece fit well together. The bass could be brought up a lot more in the climax of the piece. The track matches well I think with the theme idea you're going for. Good work!

I was hoping for some drums to show up big time, but overall decent. I dont really get "video game soundtrack" from it though.