oh, i love the story you wrote regarding how you envisioned the jam's themed illustration and how you wanted to connect to that with your composition! the track you wrote feels very gentle and subdued, but i think that works in a sort of daydream-esque manner that matches how the character is only imagining their freedom! :0
i like that the piece does pick up around 1:50 to match the storyline! i am curious how this might fit in a videogame — i can see it working for a credits scene since it's not too overwhelming in nature.