I feel like you could have an entire musical theatre play based on this song alone, it's super catchy and the vocal work is really great! Really just wish there was more movement in the chords, like instead of going back down for the last chord in the progression what if it kept going up into the chorus? I really like the chord at 2:07! It sets up a nice turnaround and I feel like you should lean into it some more. Overall a very fun submission. :)