I knew when I read the words "tone row" I was going to be in for a unique-sounding experience (in a good way)! I think you definitely hit your goal of showing that sort of fractured mental state in doing so. One area I would like to see you push that idea even more into is more variety of instrumentation and expression or mixing techniques, either in a sort of 1:1 relationship with the different tone rows (i.e., the first uses xyz instruments/mixing technique, the second uses different ones, the third uses different ones), or as bridges between them (i.e., the first starts with one set of insts/techs, which then carry over into the second one before changing and carrying over into the third). I hope that makes sense! Overall a very unique and original piece!