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A nice little game! I like how it has a short but clear story and a goal. And the main idea of the game works very well — these green sprouts symbolising a new beginning are adorable.

I would probably wish that the game was a little longer, as right now everything happens so fast and you get all the clues in a matter of seconds, so there is not that much time to process the information you've acquired :D Just a couple more scenes or "side" quests would work, I believe! Or maybe some details can be there that do not give the answer of what have happened right away. Maybe there could be some more information on the main character, for example? I also wasn't sure why I have an option to go back to the den —  there is only one path that you follow, so when you visited all the locations, there is no need to return back. 

And when I tried to go back and followed the same path once again, I was able to get 4 and 5 out of 3 clues :D 

While playing I also thought that music would work really nice here, maybe it could support this "looking for the answers and exploring" mood :)

Nevertheless I enjoyed it! A very sweet experience.

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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such helpful and thoughtful feedback! It's clear you have a lot more experience, so I appreciate your insight a great deal.

What you suggested about leaving more time to process the information makes so much sense. A few side quests and extra details or information (and maybe some red herrings?) with music will certainly help convey the mood and hopefully slow down the pacing.

And congratulations on finding 5 out of 3 clues... oops xD

So glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. Thanks again!

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If I understood correctly and this is your first game (or one of your firsts), it looks pretty impressive! 

And I will agree on the red herrings :)

Wishing you luck with your future games as well!

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Yes, it's my very first!

Thanks for the encouragement :)