"I'm just going to assume your opinion on what you just read isn't going to be very high." Well, let's first acknowledge that we shouldn't discount the initiative to make an attempt or the confidence to post it. This may not be a masterpiece, but everyone has to start somewhere, and I'm going to go through and give the same level of feedback that I have on everything else I rated since I think that's only fair. With that said, I think we can also be honest here and acknowledge that this was very much a first draft.
Implementation of Theme:
Well, we have a light and a dude named Ray. I think we can say that there's an attempt at inversion of the theme with the emphasis on moving away from the light rather than towards it, but like most of the rest of the VN, it's fairly shallow and there's just not much else right now to really bite into.
Story:
There's, well, really not much of it at the moment. What's currently present feels almost more like an outline than a draft. "I'm dreaming; oh there's a light; now I have a mission; oh, I'll go through this door; wow everyone here is a furry; this must be Ray; he seems nice; now we're in the house; it's a pretty normal house" etc.
There needs to be more at each of these "checkpoints" - I'm not saying we need intricate details about chairs in the house or anything like that, but with an isekai or any story where the protagonist is pulled out of their comfort zone, how they react to those changes informs their character. Right now, Maine doesn't really react at all to most of it, so it's hard to get invested as a reader. He doesn't understand why he's chosen? Press the guide on that. He's dropped into a world full of furries? Make him take time to adjust. Have him stumble over his words, or stare awkwardly at someone. Or, if you're going for full parody, really lean into him being an internet furry and adjusting too fast (it seems like you might have been trying to do this, but it was like one line).
Same goes for Ray - if you're trying to parody MCs falling head over heels the moment they see a wolf guy, have Ray be flirty or otherwise introduced in an outwardly sexy way that Maine rejects. Right now Ray doesn't have much of a personality at all and all of his dialogue just feels like small talk.
I also didn't really buy that "don't take the gun" was the real turning point for Maine not trusting the guide since taking the gun frankly seemed like kind of a dumb idea to me. Nothing we've seen about Maine indicates that he's used a gun before or that he'd be able to do so effectively in a stressful situation, and guns also tend to be noticeable when not wearing clothing specifically meant to conceal them. Seemed to me like the gun would risk blowing their cover more than it would be helpful unless Maine had read the script and knew they'd be attacked later.
Presentation:
I'm not going to linger too much on this since I think you're aware of most of the issues here. Sprites, backgrounds, sounds, and music should be here if you're going to do a VN, but I understand that this was kind of a last minute thing and that you ran out of time to implement these things. Two things I do want to mention here are that the bright solid backgrounds were a bit painful on the eyes (I'd definitely prefer just like MS paint squiggles of a house or something) and that there were a lot of typos and other errors like capitalization and punctuation for something this short. Again, understood you were short on time, but definitely make sure to do proofreading runs for future projects.
Creativity:
So, in the script file, we have the following: "The goal of this was to do a subversion of Adastra and general My Wolf tropes. Instead of being trusting of the Gods and falling for the wolf frame one, Maine does not trust The Guide that much and isn't willing to put themselves in too much danger for Ray."
Ultimately, I'm not sure your subversion was really all that subversive. Like, I've reviewed several submissions for this jam, and literally none of them involve the MC swooning over the love interest from frame one. While I had plenty of personal gripes with Adastra, I don't think that really did either. People have been taking the jam themes in a bunch of really unique and interesting directions and I think there needs to be more than just not simping for the wolf to make a compelling premise.
Also, "isn't willing to put themselves in too much danger for Ray" - he literally did though. Maine put himself in danger by coming out guns blazing instead of staying hidden.
Like I said at the top, it's not easy putting something together and putting it out there for the world to see. Everything I've said is intended to be purely constructive, and I encourage you to stick with it and keep writing. This one wasn't all the way there, but maybe with more time to really nail your ideas down and then get them written out and revised you can create something really special in the future.