A really lovely piece. It's multi-layered, but I could actually see some of the parallels between the characters and who they're playing. A bit of subversion with the My Wolf character as well (being a ram/a fiction within a fiction). I think the theme's implementation was really abstract, but it probably had to do with the inherent goodness in the demon. Well, and the spotlight bit, that one was a bit obvious. I found myself enraptured by both the story of Bela and Crni, and the story of the fox and the ram. They're two different romances, but they complement each other really well. The three brothers... not so much? Brutus just comes off as a stereotype and they annoyed me a bit as a whole, but it's also pretty common in plays to have an annoying ragtag antagonist crew to break up the main plot. Still, I'd have liked a bit more character depth there I guess. Though it's still a gorgeous VN overall and I'm really eager to see it continued.