hi it's Chris!
Brilliant and humorous, everything worked well like an orchestral piece that brings forth your vision of how generosity can be stifling if overdone. I was hectically juggling the casserole, flowers, vases, and all the generous antiques just to read all the dialogue you wrote--peppering laughter and smiles to myself.
A testament to how much I loved it: I read about the bug coming in, totally forgot about it, and when it happened, I thought it was intentional.
Lovely piece of art for the jam!