To be honest, between the shaky English and the lack of visuals, this was very difficult to follow. None of the lines seemed to logically follow each other, and as a result I didn't really absorb any of the plot. It was pretty much a lot of random things happening. There's definitely some creativity here, though, and I love the concept of a superhero and supervillain falling in love. Blacktail was also quite likeable, thanks to him having a monstrous exterior yet a soft heart. At any rate, I'd love to see what this VN would have looked like with a little more time in the oven.