Very interesting! It seems like you made a decision to interpret their death as a victory, which is unexpected for me, but not unreasonable, and done quite deliberately here.
The 'laser' was a bit overbearing in the mid section for my liking, but otherwise it was great, very jazzy. Did you record it in directly? Either way, you managed quite a free flow in parts while still being very rhythmically (and harmonically) sound. Nice!