Great narrative! I can tell a lot of work went into crafting the story of this game and, as a narrative lover, I really appreciate it. It really made me nostalgic for some old Nintendo and GameBoy games.
Music was lovely and very fitting for the scenes and the color palette. I will say, some of the rooms felt a bit repetitive/flat, purely in terms of aesthetics. For example the room full of spikes. I would considering adding some other elements/assets to help flesh out the world but also help break things up to the eye.
I hope you plan on continuing to refine this after the game because a couple of the endings felt so sudden and I really craved more - which is a great sign!
Well done, especially for a team of only 2!