One thing I'm in love is definitely the aesthetic of the whole song. However, I feel like there was something missing or at least, well I usually get pretty overwhelmed if something is imbalanced but it's just my biases! A very long song with unique takes is very impressive!
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I concur the front half was okay but it struggles later, just time constraints and I probably would have cut some of the things out that don't quite work. And then the result would have been more like 'Interrobang' recently that was 7min instead of 9min:
https://soundcloud.com/doug-stoothoff/real-penetration-interrobang
....which has a much better flow to it at least in my opinion
Glad you gave it a try and soldiered through it!
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