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Great job on your first game! It will only gets easier from here! 

Your game looks good and it is really immersive but there are a few things that it could be cooler.

Gameplay: It is nice, the idea and concept is not unique, a few people decided to create something like that, but yours give a unique feeling because of the lifestyle of the main character, this is create, but a few things were missing in the gameplay, like a map or directions where to go, this way the player wont be walking around trying to find anything at all and It could have a smoother gameplay.

Art and visuals: Looks awesome, really liked it, but a few things were mismatching the tile size and ratio, the main character is a different style of pixel art than the NPC's, also they are a bit bigger than usual. The grass gets too much green if you play for a few minutes, maybe adding lakes, diferent styles of grass, trees, it could solve this issue, nothing much important just small details that i noticed.

Sound/SFX: It was a bit too loud, more than I expected and there was no option to change it. I had to lower the volume in my end bc it was really loud for me! Also when you pick up objects it would be nice to have a feedback in the audio or something bc I didnt know if it wasnt working when interacting or It wasnt supposed to pick, I tried interacting with a carrot on the floor and with an "easter-egg"? Idk there was a png character behind a house on top right of the city. 

Overall for a newbie this is FANTASTIC, congratulations on your project, it will get much easier next time and I am pretty sure that you will create something amazing, nice job and keep up with the good work!