Wow what a amazing throwback to the past!
I love the aesthetic and vibe you were going for, it's really immersive with the color choice and music choice for each character reflects their personality, the writing is great, characters felt distinct from each other with their own quirks and habits.
I can't really add much besides the obvious ones such as more stories and dialogue.
This is a nitpick, but matching the keyboard sound as the text pops up would be nice! Sometimes I would hear 2 clicks for one letter which can kinda throw the player off.
Overall this is amazing for what it is! As a fellow newbie amazing job! ✨