Played again :D Overall really well polished game, and I think the last day changes improved the game a lot! The gameplay feels more intuitive with the drops marked. In addition, I don't know if I remembered it correctly, but the camera movement feels much smoother than before as well. Now moving on to the game itself:
I really loved the atmosphere and the random glitch outs. Suits very well to a narrative-based story, which enhanced the atmosphere greatly. Nothing else to say about the visuals and polishing part. They are extremely well constructed overall.
With the gameplay, the level progression provided additional enjoyment from just repeating the same loop over and over again. The narratives are really well done, and I think the narrator played a really decent part in the story. If you are going to do a post jam version, I would love to see the narrative taking more highlight! Overall well balanced.
Great job!