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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative | #314 | 3.844 | 3.844 |
| Creativity | #578 | 4.156 | 4.156 |
| Artwork | #611 | 4.156 | 4.156 |
| Audio | #1068 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Enjoyment | #2657 | 3.219 | 3.219 |
Ranked from 32 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
It is about ghost, who lives in a looping room
(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
All 2D art, 3D art, music, sfx, gameplay, coding by me :D
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Animation is incredible.
I played the Android build and loved my time with it. So much charm and a real joy to loop through.
Thanks :D Hope it was fun expirience... that is sad and scary and psychological XD (the horror aspects of this game is basicly non existant Kek)
The positive: Unique art style. Strange, engaging concept. It's pretty cool that the developer did everything themselves. I enjoyed the music.
The negative: I had trouble reading some of the handwriting. I had to give up on comprehending a couple of the words. I can imagine it's even harder for younger players who never learned cursive in school to understand what's going on. The artwork is so simplistic that the context from the notes is very necessary so this made the game a bit frustrating. Playing this through to end left me with the distinct thought "What was that? What did I just spend my time on? I'm so confused". I personally don't like being left with that feeling but I do think there are gamers who seek this exact experience (and some of the other comments confirm this). I do wish there had been more to the game after escaping the room. It felt like the entire game was just a railroaded story that I was clicking through and it ended right when it could have branched out into something more player-led and fun.
Over all: Definitely unique and artsy. More of an interactive story than a game. Could have been a bit more comprehensible. Just not really my thing.
In my defence just to get this i used 2 days to get evry asset (not 3d ones) and at the finnish the diologue was bad but i didn't want to spend another day remaking it ;-; also the storry was bigger (with more rooms even) but scope creep wich made final story pretty shallow and uncomprhenciv, BUT thanks for playing the game and writing.. a paragraph of feed back XD (thx alot :D )
I looped like 32 times and i dont know if i got the ending? ANYWAYS OTHER THEN THAT I LOVE THIS GAME THE ARTWORK IS SO COOL AND CHARMING ANDND KANFAODHISDB
You really OUT DONE IT. XD but yeah there is only loops XD. AND TYSM FOR THE REVIEW I LOVE TO HEAR IT :DD
Woow. It was deep and very artistic. Good job man,loved the little animations.
Thanks alot :D
Way deeper than I thought it would be, especially because I was initially drawn to it simply because it looked like a Spiderverse trip. It did NOT disappoint
Hahaha, i love the spiderverse comment. Thanks that you liked my game XD
Really interesting game, had way more depth to it than I expected. The messy handdrawn artstyle is great and the reveal to 3d with the music change was fire. Congrats on making this game and doing everything on your own! :D
Thanks alot XD, it was fun to create this game and I'm glad you liked it :D
Interesting art style and music awesome too! Maybe some text are a bit hard to read
It sadly is an issue as the diologue was hard to put together and looking back i did it all wrong ;-;, but it works.. somewhat XD
Really interesting art style, I love it. It was a bit hard to read at times, but otherwise a cool game.
Thanks alot :D
My favorite game in the jam for sure! This was incredible! :D
Loved everything, from the artstyle to how the fun music suddenly got filtered and wobbly, to the sudden shift in art style towards the end, and the unsettling vibe.
Incredible, incredible work! :D
I am so happy that you enjoyed my game, and i hope you have great time yourself :D
That was really creepy... and super cool woah!
Thanks, that what i was going for XD
One of my favorite games of the jam!
The paper scanned art style gives such a unique feel to the game.
The crumpling sound for the text box is so perfect it makes it really satisfying to interact with the objects in the room. The text itself being hard to read also makes interesting to decipher along with the cutscenes.
I was really shocked by the surprise ending, I did not expect it at all. Going from a 2D chaotic stylized atmosphere to this more polished 3D one caught me off guard. The music changing between these two areas highlights how different they are as well. The 2D section is a very simple melody while the more "realistic" 3D section has a more layered instrumental.
Good luck during the jam!
TYSM, i am so happy that somone noticed the music, i put in the 2d section more game type music, whilst in 3d i switched to more real instruments and some effects, I'm so happy that you noticed that 'v', also TYSM for review :D
You have a good sense of art direction!
If you have some time on your hands, feel free to check out my submission too :)
i am definitely tmr :D
Awesome!
Tell me what you think of it when you try it out.
I loved the animation and atmosphere!
Thanks it all was hand drawn on paper :D
This was great! I loved the animation style!
Thanks alot, took me while to draw it all XD
Really nice art and animations! Story was also engaging and creepy. I think sometimes it was a little too difficult to read the text, but otherwise this was well done!
Thanks, this is my first story based game and the text was scaned in from paper thats why it is sometimes so bad XD
This is such an amazing project and tou did an AMAZING JOB! I love the big reveale at the end and the art style, 2D and 3D was AWESOME!
Hell yeah, i was quite happy myself at big reveal :D
Extremely creative project. Very well done
Thanks, It was fun to make and even more fun to see somone enjoy it :D
This is really cool! The art styles is crazy, but fun, enjoyed it a lot. It’s not easy to make a point-and-click game fun, but this one is! Well done :D
PS: The soup has flooded my whole house, I guess this wasn’t supposed to happen, yet it was really funny xD
What, XD do you have screenshot for that? Like the soup supost to move in its bowl, but it seams it escaped the containment :skull:
The artwork in this game is incredible. The storyline is really interesting and uses the theme well, insanely impressed overall.
Thanks, i tried altho i can tell myself it had some lacking parts in story line, but i think i did great for first story game :D
In my experiance i add to do it like 3or 4 times to go to the lastn lvl
I love the arttyle in the end we get like a 3d scene and we see te drugs that give him this dream the songs are great too
Thanks, all the assets by me XD (Took me the most time) but it has some build up for that reveal ;)