A very very interesting entry for sure, reminds me of Life is Strange. I liked the idea and the writing very much, but in my opinion, the main thing holding the game back is the lack of cohesion in the artstyle. Don't get me wrong, some art is quite good here (i love the design of the demon!) but it's a bit all over the place with pixel art, more "realistic" style, etc., so the game lacks a clear artistic vision. Also audio is super important for a game like this. It's still a very creative entry and I hope you keep working on it.