some cool ideas here. I really like the “7 deadly sins” style framework of it

Good work, the flavor text in particular is really well written!

There's a lot of potential in the setting, but it feels like its constraint by the limited space of the contest. I would be really interested in a versions were each location got a real opportunity to shine!

Uma aventura pointcrawl bem legal com temática de morte/pós-vida. Um item mágico poderoso, mas limitado e amaldiçoado (do jeito que eu gosto), com efeitos bem interessantes. Um quebra-cabeça bem criativo e único, de acordo com a temática da aventura. Gostei bastante, parabéns pelo excelente trabalho. Acho que essa aventura se encaixaria muito bem após um TPK, hahahaha.

A afterlife landscape for the players to escape from. I love the thought that has gone into the theme of negative emotions. I wonder if a more explicit hook for the characters could prompt more connections between locations and encounters.

Great vibes. Evocative descriptions. I’d like to see this fleshed out with more gameable detail.

I love the art and atmosphere of this. I found the layout confusing initially, but it does make sense for printing. I'm not sure I understand how the puzzle works - do the figurines themselves glow, or are they just recognisable as the spirits that have previously been encountered, who have particular colours associated with them? Would love to see a longer version with more space to elaborate on all the areas and the spirits.

The text here is very evocative and sets the imagination wheeling. The true nature of the final spirit is really interesting and has some cool implications for future adventures.

Moody, atmospheric and delicate in feel. Really liked this - it has a sombre grace to it. Would be a fantastic palate cleanser in the midst of a campaign, as some kind of liminal sphere or dreamland between other locations.

Interesting setup with great atmosphere. The maps are really good!

Wonderfully creepy, atmospheric place for an adventure!

Very nice, I especially like the Urn's powers. 

Big fan of the map & each location’s incredible vibes! As stated by another commenter, I would absolutely use this module as a testing ground post-TPK to see if my PCs could earn a second chance at life. Good job!

I enjoyed the maps. I can see using this adventure for a one-shot or a couple sessions, or a GM could fully detail out the different locations and make a whole campaign out of it, using this sort of like an outline or guide. The quotes add a ton of atmosphere and give a great feel for the world. 

Excellent atmospheric writing and great sketchy map style! I also enjoyed some of the small details, such as the side effects of Unholy Healing and the Thanobex! Good work!

Woah.  I found the writing absorbing.  I like the unique creatures.   I'd mention the suggestive map & flawless formatting too.  Much left to interpretation and referee's fiat, like how the puzzle would go down.  I could see this used in a few ways including a planes based campaign.   Congrats on this splendid piece.

Very eerie & atmospheric setting! 

Very cool adventure! I love the map and the tags for each location are very helpful and cool. 

This feels like a scenario one could run as a journey into the afterlife, perhaps if a party was accidentally wiped out! Simple but effective. I like the structure of the locations as islands, as this gives well delineated areas with a clear means of travel between them. More specific details would perhaps bring the locations into sharper relief for me. Nicely done.