The artwork and overall presentation have a great home-made zine feel that is very reminiscent of the 1970s. It perfectly captures the spirit of someone reading the Appendix N authors and then creating their own inspired adventure.
The design feels dynamic and alive. The central chase mechanic, with its random event tables and the ever-present threat of Vel Anor's army, creates a truly tense journey. The final moral choice presented by the Doom-Pact—forcing players to decide which of two kingdoms is doomed—is a fantastic, grim fantasy dilemma.
From a usability standpoint, the layout is excellent. The two-column format and clear font choices make the document easy to parse and run at the table. Well done on a great submission!