If you want to turn this project into a game. You could try giving the player something to interact with. If you don't, it's not a game; it's just a text. If you're confident in your stories, great. You can try harder to turn it into a game next time. Good Job!
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Technically, “Snared Spirut” is interactive. The only way through the story is to interact with the screen.
Interactive fiction has been considered games since its origins.
I agree I could add more to it, tho. Parts of the coding was new to me, so it all took up the jam to work through. Now there’s time to experiment more.
Thanks you for reading.