This isn't really a bad track at all. I like the use of more analog-esq synths. I feel like they're quite thin though on top of not really creating ambience but more serving as a device to deliver melodies, nice ones for what it's worth.
I feel like spacing out the synth melody would have helped a lot, same goes for the piano in the beginning. Everything that makes this track stand out in a jam like this is hidden behind the piano and synth lead.
Otherwise though, not a bad piece of composed work at all. I think if you're going to use the full six minutes on 1 track it's better to have something that takes advantage of all of that time instead of uses it to create what feels a bit like two tracks just padded into one.