The writing is cute, I like how the main character asks the animals to return so politely, and the interactions feel very wholesome. And I like that the dog and cat each had their own special minigame. I had to check the comments to see if I was missing anything after I'd collected them all.
It took me a moment to figure out what the cat minigame was. I like that you changed the music to a lullaby when the cat was sleeping, that's a fun detail :)