The music beat is FIRE, the visuals are nice but why are they low quality, the story is nice but the text moves too slow give us the option to control the pace this is a torture for fast readers goodjob overall

this was made in Scratch and it's a good story game

What a unique idea! I really enjoyed this game. It has a profound message that I wasn't expecting.

Nice

Man that is one unique entry...

I LOVED this.

This is so simple, so different from everyone else here and rly impactful.

If this is your own personal story of trying to become a game developer despite having a whole other job in life, then i wish you the best in life, and i hope you reach the goals you desire in life.

Thank you for your hard work!

~Marilyne

That was certainly an experience. Definitely one of the games of this jam. 

This might one of the best narrative entry in this jam! First of all i don't trully understand if this a visual novel game, and i thought that the intro is quite long and explain everything in a boring way (IMO). Then i just follow line by line, and amazed with how natural and emotional each dialogues. Great job!

I really have this problem and it’s hard to balance work and life. You’ve managed to give me a hint that I need to reach out to my family first. Thank you for your advice.

I really like the message at the end. Cool game, nice music and atmosphere

Good luck in game jam :D

Very interesting Scratch game

This game is very interesting, I would say it's more like an art form.  I wish there more choices and branches, the theme is catchy.

The only thing is bothering is unskippable dialog, so you have to wait fixed amount of time, instead I would prefer manually switch dialog by clicking, so each player would set it's own pace.

Had fun playing it!

I like the artworks and message, though more gameplay elements would be nice, since the game is just reading texts and click a few buttons

Other than that, great job!

I liked the message you gave at the end. Well done.

Cute little story game, nice work! With some extra polish it's definitely got some legs. I think one thing I would suggest is maybe just adding a click to skip/continue on each speech bubble. I found myself reading a lot faster than the bubbles were presenting. Great work!

I think the improvement is needed in making the game more engaging, i don't like the reading stuff personally. However, I like the idea behind the game and the way it intersects with theme.

I gave the max ratings for innovations and theme, cause I find this game very original. I liked the story.

For the gameplay wise and audio, I would improve it making the choices more complicated and adding some sound effect. The art is very cool, I would liked different scenarios and places.

Great work.

The pixel art is nice

Nice work!

Personally loved the art style and the character's facial expressions are pretty dang awesome and cute haha! Also, the idea and storyline with choices to pick from stand out so good job on that. Though, I kind of wished there was a skip the entire monologue button (if I didn't miss it lol), but overall, a solid game, especially being made in SCRATCH! Good work!

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