bad guys wanna fight! has some interesting stuff going on, the little vocal "YOW!"s give it some nice character. I think you have some solid foundations here, just keep improving on your skills and work on your mixing and I'm sure your next submission will be solid!
Also, your soundtrack is incredibly loud, I had to turn down my volume by about 75% to be able to listen to it. The answer to making your songs loud isn't just turning up the volume, look into proper EQing. When you are mixing your track for volume, try turning everything down first. Then, starting with the most important element and working your way down from there, turning each track back up individually until they are at the volume you want them to be.