The first track falls a bit short for me in that it just doesn't feel like much is happening over the course of 4 minutes. Even a little beat or some (more consistent) background textures would help liven things up a bit!
"Mourning After" picks up nicely afterwards, the chord progression here works really well.
"Once Upon A Summer Night" has a really boppin' synth bass that gets things moving nicely.
"Sleeping on Incongruities was really cool with it's powerful, in-your-face textures from the beginning.
Overall, a solid submission with great guitar work, and I'm always down for a good time loop story. Nice job!