First off, I love your story concept! I think this story is one of the most unique and will probably be one of the ones that comes to mind when I think about this jam as a whole.
Right off the bat, I was in love with the melody in "Ouverture" - really powerful stuff. "Don't Be Afraid" is a cool little tie-in track into your third track, which I'm not going to even attempt to spell or pronounce even though I could clearly just copy and paste it. Anyway, uh... it was good. The whole thing was good. Good job!