Things that I found are as follows:
1) The mouse pointer is supposed to be locked, which isn't the case in the game. So only limited player movement is possible
2) After the Artist says "here's my agent's number" The player gets nothing.
3)I got that your game conform to theme, but currently your game doesn't actively relay this via graphics, text or sound which is saddening
Love to see a finished game with a finished story even if you need more time for the graphic etc.
Though I liked the part where you added VN like elements in 3D.
Also please rate my game if you'd feel like it, I thank you in advance for any support you'd give!