The story has a very fun concept and I can feel the vibe through the music. The prison theme has a sad but very relaxing and hopeful tone to it. I would love to see the chords and the lead to maybe be tweaked a little so we can feel that vibe a little more. I love Escape and That sure was something, I could see that fitting the game you are describing perfectly and if I was playing your game I wouldn't even see it out of place. Great Job, keep it up, and never loose that goofy and creative side of your composition cause thats what makes your music you!