Woohoo, great first composition! You have a great sense of telling a story through music and that’s what we’re all here trying to do. I was able to follow along and I could clearly tell the rats from the bear and the conflict that ensues. I think landing on a big chord at the end and letting it ring out is a great choice for an ambiguous and bittersweet ending - the piano chord seems to be cut off while the cymbals still ring a little afterward. I wonder if letting the piano chord ring and play through its entire natural decay would help the track feel conclusive and spare it from the abruptness. Nice work with this and thank you so much for sharing your first composition with us here!