Minor typos:
1. At least one instance of "steets" (should be "streets")
2. Gabriel says "porpoise" when meeting you when it should be "purpose" (unless setting up a nautical pun)
3. "a lot of that things" (should be "a lot of those things")
4. "Now if you don't mind come with me, it's best if we state to the police together" should be "don't mind coming with me, it's..." or "don't mind, come with me — it's..." and "best if we make statements to the police together" (English is dumb, "stating" to the police is not a thing, only the word "statement(s)" which requires a different verb before it)
5. Cicero says he will wait for you at the beach "from 8 to 3am", but he means 8am to 3pm.
6. Alastor is missing a period during the beach party: "success You" (between the words)
7. "bicth"
8. "Can't believe you kill the Warlord" -> "killed"
9. After recruiting Zyron, he says he needs to take a shower because "you made me sweat in the fight". The fight that happened 2+ days ago because of how it's scripted? Gross, Zyron.
10. "I've heard is good for something" -> "it's"
11. "of coruse he's not around" -> "course"
12. "You watc as the" -> "watch"
13. Missing period between "good Like"
14. How did one of the executives record Levi licking up a puddle if recording devices are forbidden on penalty of death? "One of them recorded it. And forced me to watch it."
15. "a entrance" -> "an"
16. From X, "And not always works," should be something like "And it doesn't always work"
17. From Jhaan, "I don't what's that." Did you mean to put a pause in the middle, like with a —?
18. "accept what you are nowl."
19. "The question is... I want the Praharma to finish that portal?" -> "do I want"