"You said your eager to die. That enthusiasm is refreshing." Me and the other team member got a chuckle out of this lmaoo. The dialogue is hilarious at first but I actually get invested into it later on - it gets deeper and makes me question/think about certain concepts.
The music and art is done really well. It fits the story and changes appropriately depending on what's going on. The story is portrayed really well through the dialogue. The characters expressions fit the dialogue so there is no disconnect between the dialogue and art which is good. The game made me feel uneasy and slightly depressed towards the end.
You guys did a good job on the game and it really feels like a complete message to the player. I love how you used humour at the beginning to lighten the mood and get the player to let down their guard. It really makes the rest of the game hit, that was a highlight for me because I wasn't expecting the game to go down that route. I have nothing bad to really say about the game, it's well made and the perfect length imo. I don't even think their is a potential for a part 2 it's just a one and done thing.
I liked the way the story was presented through job interviews, its an interesting thing -> matching death with a job interview -> is that hinting that people sell their souls to corporate jobs? Like once u become a 9-5 slave you might as well be dead? Lots to think about. If you had more time I think it would be cool to have some more animation and interactions (although dialogue games have very limited interactions)