i finally got around to playing this properly!!! i liked it a lot and i really do love the whole notepad concept and actually having to THINK about what you need to proceed! i actually love that a lot, i think in future if you keep working on it it could be interesting to have a few different options (silly, or serious!) to change the path of the game slightly. i think lighting definitely needs to be worked on, but i saw in your other comment that things had to be condensed and brightness changed to fit on itch and i totally understand that!! i really did enjoy this concept and i am glad i came back to it to see it through!