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The end is never the end

A topic by kyorume created Oct 14, 2025 Views: 274 Replies: 2
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Now that the game jam is over, I'm sort of hoping to receive actual constructive feedback and criticism on my work for this jam.

You don't have to of course, but I would really appreciate feedback, in which case thank you!

my reason for posting this is mainly because I wasn't wholly convinced with the feedback I received in the comments, I seek more honest feedback as that would help me improve and maybe notice flaws I wouldn't otherwise, that's about it really. 

https://dream-realms-pictures.itch.io/cubus-mortis

Submitted

I've downloaded your game, and plan to play it later tonight

is there any area you'd like me to focus my feedback? visuals, music, gamplay, etc?

we had the same problem, so I completely understand

Submitted

Hi, thanks for taking your time for it!

Since this is a VN, the overall experience matters, as for the different areas, I did most of the work on the CGs and writing the story, so feedback on those areas would be great.