This is a well-told story and it is creative, and it evokes the feelings of loss and the difficulty of ‘being ready’ to face it. It also pictures the love and the possibility of revisiting and reconnecting with someone you lost and loved, and how hard that also is. I think it is a good story, and I am happy that Mom thought to leave something for his son in the future, even encouraging him to tidy up her room, that hadn’t been visited since her death, which is also a powerful theme.
Well done.