Thank you for the game!
I liked the moody lighting and sound design, you did a good job creating a dark atmosphere. I was not particularly impressed with the story. I liked the core idea about the character confronting their guilt, but the way it unfolded was not convincing for me. Maibe the problem is that I didn't find Jane's guild convincing enough to deserve such a morose ending, I wish the game offered me some opportunities to change her fate. But some narrative design decisions were pretty cool, I especially liked the flashback. Also I was expecting other characters to fit into the flashback story too in some way, but instead they felt like just some random people.
At one point I almost stuck and thought that this was due to a bug, the game did not communicated to me clearly that the door to the last room was closed and I had to find the key for it.
Sorry for the critical comment, hope it will not discourage you! I'm glad you vere able to pull this off in such a short time, congrats on that!