I really enjoyed the idea behind this game! I love games where your character is imperfect, and is sometimes even the bad guy in their own life. I think this adds a lot of interesting motivations. All of the passages felt like they were written by the same person, so big props for that! My main critique is that choosing a route at the start sometimes only affects the ending. For example, each time I chose the wrath storyline, I never got a wrath storylet -- once I got only greed ones. I wish I could've seen those storylets! But despite that, I think the game is very well written, and the concept is a unique and enjoyable one. Well done!