I really enjoy all of the worldbuilding detail you've added into the game, it feels much more immersive now! The pictures you've included are a very nice touch as well, I can visualize the PCs life and surroundings much better with both additions.
There were a couple bugs, but nothing that made the game unplayable. At times it was a little difficult to read as well. The formatting is a little inconsistent as well, such as breaking up dialogue in some moments but not others.