Absolutely, you’re right! Here’s the improved version:
The player takes on the role of the captain of a starship, known across the galaxy as Captain Protonic. For centuries, the galaxy has lived in harmony under a single Confederation of united races and civilizations. But this long era of peace is suddenly shattered by a mysterious threat emerging from nowhere.
A whole galaxy awaits: colonies to help, an enemy to defeat, missions and quests to complete. All of this unfolds in an online world with asynchronous multiplayer, where players from around the globe contribute to expanding the universe and fighting back against the darkness together.
As development continues, the game will grow with new details, new systems, and the ability to build your own career or take a completely different path—within a dynamic, evolving narrative.