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A jam submission

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aetloh's entry for queblesJam
Submitted by aetloh — 14 hours, 26 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#533.4503.571
Controls#1012.8292.929
Fun#1112.6222.714
Audio#1322.0012.071
Originality#1322.3462.429
Graphics#1422.4152.500

Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

Others have noted where the room for improvement lies. Once I figured it out, there was fun to be had! Best of luck continuing on your game dev journey!

Submitted

I think having some way in game to show the player what to do would be beneficial as the instructions are not very clear. Also not sure if I had a bug but the game never ended once I got to 10$ and the long hallway at the beginning seemed unnecessary. Overall liked the concept. I think there's a lot more that could be done with it.

Developer

thanks yeah thats the most feedback i got for my next project i will keep all feedback ive gotten in mind Thanks (ps keep up the work your really good at it(trial of the magemaster is <3))

Submitted

Saw this on stream. Pretty fun!! Could be improved with a better tutorial and/or progression? 🤔🤔 otherwise pretty neat. Good job! ☺️☺️

Developer(+1)

thanks, also saw your's also on stream still can't believe how good your's and other submissions were :O ,will keep the feedback in mind :P

Submitted

I've completed the game. I think u should add more desciption to game page. I wasnt sure how the game works. I figured it out 2 refresh and 3 lose. Walking big corridor and openning door every run is annoying to me. Lastly, if a intereact label woulve appered on top of items it would be better.  Memorizing items a goood catch for theme, concept is fun.

Submitted (1 edit)

Super fun but I am terrible at it


Never mind I just got really good at it

Developer (1 edit)

thanks i was also ,my goldfish brain could not even remember the order i set my self :P needed 21 tries my self :C

Submitted

i took like 5 mins to understand what i was supposed to do, but other than that, its a cool concept, could use some tutorial

Developer

yeah sorry i tried it in the starting screne but idk thanks for playing

Submitted

Great job submitting your project! I think the game definitely needs a bit more tutorial and polish, but I am sure you are aware of that already. Cheers!

Developer

Thank you and yeah i was kinda locked in about the switching mechanic that brought maany bugs but i will try to do better thanks for your time :D

also i saw your entry and it was really fun to watch

Submitted

Not bad. Controls are good and it did follow the theme well. The instructions could be better though.


- Nabir14

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the review and yeah i should have done a more understandable tutorial:D

Submitted

Nice! I managed to finish in 20 runs =D

Just a note… the door at the start is a bit confusing because I can’t interact with it until I reached 10$ =)

Developer

Yeah my bf also mentioned the confusion and next time i make something i will try to do better, thanks for playing