I like your little sliding bars at the beginning that give you guidance on what to expect the adventure to be like.  The art is way cool! I like the map. I can tell you were trying to make the adventure easy for the GM to run. You even added some note pages.  I like how you put clues in the radio transmissions.  A lot of fun ideas in here!

Hey, this was a lot of fun to read through, and it seems very usable. I like the Adventure-type scales at the beginning that let GMs/Players know what to expect. Having the players pick the quick start scenario is a fun touch. Respect for handcrafting your map and the 3D perspectives were a nice touch! 

Thank goodness Captain Sneerl forgot to charge his disintegration gun!

This one was cool, really liked the cover and the notable items. Also cool to have multiple setups to the scenario. 

Was the art yours? It's great, love the line work!

Those Notable Items are all awesome!

This is such a neat module, and it feels really ready to deploy at the table. Light and punchy. I love the texture on your cover illustration, and I gotta say, I think it's a real power move to use one of your few pages within the limit for GM notes.