This is really freaking good!
If Vampire was written by Mae Borowski, it'd read pretty much exactly like Bloodsuckers.
Would love to play a campaign of this, sometime.
this is the best piece of crit ive ever received on a project LOL.
if you do get around to playing it, lemme know what happens!!!! hearing about how people played the game is the best part of making an rpg (thereโs a little ticker tape over on the emergency archive i set up to keep the game hosted when funko pop took itch.io down for ppl to submit news headlines from their home campaigns)
Wanted to say, this game heavily influenced the one I've been working on. I don't think there's any direct text in use, but I went ahead and attributed it and We Hunt By Night in the License section at the end.
Here's the current draft of the book, if you're curious. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sVFd-Jx4ZT0m_90wb2MzWvvRtz_4fRnq/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=111535375486000228685&rtpof=true&sd=true