Visuals
1 ... art elements fits together well
2 ... gives simple RNG camera motion around target to create extra feeling of the game (currently you just stare on side fixed scenes).
Design
1 ... add dialog skip/fast forward -> this gives player feeling of control
2 ... what, this is m************r??? -> very good & unique
3 ... scope small very good for game jam
Controls
1 ... give player option to look around when driving a card to some extend (current is fixed)
Sound
1 ... no main menu (or its bug?)
2 ... (game) sound if good & gives creepy feeling
3 ... I love this fake voice acting +1
Bugs
1 ... lags when clicking play button -> to fix this add some loading bar & load scene in BG
2 ... (game scene 1): re-click on car reset dialog from start & all loops