This was a great game. It was so beautiful and calming. Although that last platforming bit was way too hard (I had to get help to do it). The story was also interesting. I would love to see a longer game made from this. I think it would be so cool! The music in the title screen is beautiful and the sounds throughout the whole game was quite calming. The only critique I would give is that the bird ambience didn't loop properly and the text was a bit slow. I think the slow text works really well in the beginning to set the tone, but it gets a tiny bit annoying as it goes on, especially when it sometimes prevents you from moving. But its not too big of a deal since the game is pretty short. Overall, this was a great little experience!

The visual is so pretty. I enjoy the story and the platform part is a bit hard but fun to play. Great work :)

absolutely beautiful visuals- the camera felt perfectly paced and the pixel art and lighting was absolutely stunning. the jumping and running around did feel super good- maybe a little slidey though? coming from someone that wanted to main luigi in smash and couldn't get around his slippy-ness tho </3 incredibly lovely game, very impressive too!!

Strong fundamentals,  clear narrative direction and smooth controls.  The platforming difficulty spike is a little harsh but all in all a well polished game.

I the visuals as others say is quite cool,  i also agree its a bit slow, but i can see the effort thats gone into it. I like the effect where the text comes up but you're allowed to keep moving, and its still readable without being annoying :)

That outdoor background caught my attention immediately. The lightning through the window with the dust particles floating in it looked really nice. There's a lot of detail in the visuals here. It's really impressive that you made all that from scratch. The art direction feels cohesive, and some of these scenes genuinely look beautiful. The platforming had some fun moments too. It felt like the level design made full use of the jump kit instead of just giving it to you and forgetting about it. Awesome this was done in only 1 week.

This game is great visually and the parkour is very fun and polished. A few notes though. Although the story was great (even the sad ending), I felt that the opening was probably a bit too slow. Like I didn't need several long unskippable dialouge lines to tell me that I should walk faster or keep going away from the hospital. By that point I was just kind of itching to get into the gameplay and it felt like it kept stopping me. Don't get me wrong the cinematic opening sequence was great, I just feel like it went on for a bit too long. My other complaint is that those final jumps were so hard I almost ragequit multiple times. Honestly thank you because I also made a pretty difficult platformer and now I have to experience the feelings I've put other people through. I totally understand though if they were harder for players than you imagined because the same thing happened to me. I played my levels so many times that even the hardest jumps were easy, and then everyone else who played it found them way too difficult. Still though this is an incredible game with good gameplay, a riveting story, and great visuals. Amazing job!

This was a fun platformer! I liked the story telling element (also thank you for having him speed up, haha) Some one screen prompts for the controls would be nice. Since the game takes up the entire page (and I couldn't scroll once the game launched) I didn't see the controls until I opened another tab and scrolled down. Being able to key map would also be really cool. I would have loved to try the platforming with a AD and space for movement and jump.  Overall though great game! Loved the art style, the foreground detailing in the hospital was a really nice touch.

Wow! The artwork was beautiful and really drew me into the setting. The story is mysterious but it does come on a little heavy. There's so much potential for environmental storytelling with your art style that I wonder if it could do a better job carrying the exposition. Just a thought! The dialogue was still well written.

The art is beautiful and the platforming section felt really good to play. The dialogue felt a bit too long in parts, and combined with the walking pace, it slowed things down a lot - maybe having the dialogue play while not stopping the player would feel a bit better. So impressive for a solo dev in a week though, the credits were well deserved :)

Great pixel art! The controls feel nice. The story is interesting, though the text animation feels a bit slow. The last platform jump is a skill check :D It's fun since there's only one, but if you're planning to add more, one-way platforms might be a better option. Great work overall!

The art direction and animations are definitely strong points.

For the controls, mapping jump to space could make it more intuitive.
I also noticed some difficulty spikes and long monologue sections that couldn’t be skipped, which slightly affected the flow.
That said, great work as a solo dev ❕
I’d love to hear your thoughts on our game as well if you get the chance.