I hade a very good time with your games, thank you for them! And best off luck in whatever you are going to do next!
Ilya Shevelev
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Thank you for playing twice and for the detailed feedback! Actually I’m working on a post jam version of the game and will drop it soon after the jam end. Not sure about the gun purchase, but there will be a lot of new content and things to unlock:)
So if your are interested - follow me so you will get notified when the update is released.
One more thing - check this guy out, especially his stream where he is playing games of newbies and critiques them. It’s probably the best possible game design crash course, available in Russian https://www.youtube.com/@xkoster
First - congratulations on your first ever jam submission! This happens once in a lifetime, so it’s should be for sure celebrated!
As for the game, besides the main villain and sound effects, which are both nice, I honestly have a mixed feelings for it, so here is my critique, hope it will help you to grow:
- I never figured out how to play the game. Probably I’m not smart enough, but those guys I’m supposed to call tell me different digits and I never figured it out how to know if they are saying truth or not. So, probably some tutorial round describing the gameplay loop would help there.
- Game’s page looks poor, same is applicable to the game’s thumbnail. Check how alike games doing both and work on yours, good thumbnail and page on itch is a must as they are the bricks on the road to your game for the player.
- You have a tiny UI and default font. Next jam take some time and pick some cool Google font, it’s free, it’s a fast thing to do and it immediately adds to the vibe.
Is I never passed the day one, cannot provide any feedback regarding gameplay besides the above, but anyway, congratulations once again and cheer up, you did it!






