Visuals
1 ... (main): play, quit is hardly visible -> fix:
1.1 . (main): lighter color adjustment
1.2 . (main): blur, darken BG (world map)
1.3 . (main/game over): result -> GUI gain a lot of visibility
2 ... aesthetics fits together +1
3 ... adjust GUI padding (text inside box is not sometimes fully inside and some times half-half)
4 ... camera teleport is sometimes too harsh (insta teleport)
5 ... add animations -> some parts feels little static
6 ... those moving "humans" from A to B town -> gives a lot of motion
7 ... maybe animate border shadows:
7.1 . opacity 0.2 -> 0.7
7.2 . noise distortion shader
Design
1 ... interesting ending -> it has some personal touch
2 ... I ignored this eye text. But mostly texts are short
Controls
1 ... mouse hover/click -> responsive
Sound
1 ... (main): fits very well
2 ... (game): very good fits theme well
Bugs
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I think: "Game sound is stronger aspect of this game"
Good job