Yo guys, was always wanted to create a visual novel style game with my own storyline. It's about a shy high school boy who is way into gaming but afraid to talk to people, then he meets his school president as soon as he joins the new school turns out she is also a biiig gamer. 
What will happen, how it will go, whether he will impress her or she will beat the ....outta him. 

Check out my game - Crush Counter : Level up
Tell me whether you guys like it or does it sucks ? Please go easy since I'm no dev - just wanted to create an awesom story line. 

I don't know what this is. If you want to create an awesome story line why not write a story? From what I saw your story is bad. I don't blame you entirely. The service you used to make the game is bad. It did not know what I was trying to do. It felt like it was dong its own thing regardless of my input. My advice. Write a story. Renpy is super east to use and is perfect for what you want. :)