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The prologue was fantastic, the dialogue felt natural and interesting, the pacing felt good, the renders were great (albeit the suit transition renders could be better imo) and the posing was spot on , the sequence of events felt well thought out and flowed naturally and made enough sense to not be immersion breaking, although i did question why the scientist would be utilizing public transportation in an emergency situation with top secret tech in hand, but some suspension of disbelief should be expected for a story like this to work. The characters felt unique and distinctive for what we've seen so far, the hero's felt like hero's even if some clearly have ulterior motives and the villains felt like villains. The plot set up was also engaging so I'm interested to see where this story ends up.
Overall, I'm really excited to see what comes of this story and I'm not even really into superhero tropes because I think they're cheesy, but great job so far.