Unbelievable first jam, honestly you did amazing, and this is perfectly in scope, and well executed.
The monster stays on screen too long, and doesn't do anything other than float there, the smoke he disappears in is more comical than scary, the word mechanic is awesome, and really unique! all of my critique boils down to this; i wish there was more, the game is very well scoped, and i only desire more depth.
consider this jam a resounding success c: